Dangling modifiers occur when writers leave out the target word or words being modified.
How to Fix Dangling Modifiers
Fix dangling modifiers by adding the missing target words. In the example above, the phrase After starting the Robot applies to the individual who began the dance moves, not the dance floor itself. Thus, it needs the target word Siri added. Additionally, we need with the verb noticed to complete the main clause Siri noticed the dance floor suddenly emptied.
Dangling Modifier Practice
Directions: Fix the dangling modifiers in each of the following sentences using the target words in the parentheses. Keep in mind that you may have to add additional words and rearrange the sentence. Check your answers below.
- After three days of binging Netflix, there were no more television shows to watch. (Steve)
- Hoping for a pet tiger for Christmas, the bicycle was a huge disappointment. (Leticia)
- Before finishing her Minecraft game, it was time to complete the algebra worksheet. (Denise)
- With a friendly grin, the hoverboard was returned to its rightful owner. (Gavin)
Dangling Modifier Practice Answers
- After three days of binging Netflix, Steve had no more television shows to watch.
- Hoping for a pet tiger for Christmas, Leticia was disappointed by the bicycle under the tree.
- Before finishing her Minecraft game, Denise had to complete her algebra worksheet.
- With a friendly grin, Gavin returned the hoverboard to its rightful owner.
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